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I am the Second Alice

The son of diamonds, my notes at hand

Singing my ethereal songs

Singing in this crazed Wonderland

My songs, they entrance your mind

My songs, they reach your very soul

Who knows what they'll help you find

Perhaps something that will break you, or make you whole

I keep on singing, my enchanting voice beginning to strain

My notes stained with my blood

That is when the little dream felt my pain

My thoughts of death began to bud

The Skeletons encircle me, the madness seeping in

My body trembles, eyes slowly glance to my hand

I see the pistol shining in my trembling limb

My own songs brought me to insanity, is suicide a sin?

I can't help but smile, pistol pointed to my head

This is my end, I can't help but grin

I pull the silver trigger, and now I'm dead

Embraced by skeletons, my heart full of malice

In the end, I was not worthy to be Alice.
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Yay, my second submission and poem for my four part poem series for the Vocaloid characters of "Alice Human Sacrifice" ^^. And here is Kaito's poem ^^, Kaito is my fav vocaloid, as can be seen from my avatar XD. Hope you like it and stay tuned for the next two X3. And also thanks to :iconjohnnynothing: for reading it beforehand for me ^^. And to :iconanaofthefunk: for her Vocaloid picture series for inspiring me to write these poems, and also thanks to her for making that adorable pic of Kaito X3

*Image does not belong to me, it belongs to google
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Mood: Love ~ShadowBunnyIce Apr 9, 2013  New member Hobbyist Artist
I liked this one...I really liked how you ended the poem.
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~RozenMaidenFan May 5, 2013  Hobbyist Photographer
Thank you very much!
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~BeautifulBlack-Soul Nov 3, 2011  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
this is a really good poem. you got a good grasp on Kaito, and his view. since he (in this poem) killed himself, the poem got that "ooh" to the end of it. very good.
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~RozenMaidenFan Nov 5, 2011  Hobbyist Photographer
Thank you very much, I appreciate your kind words :] And I'm glad you think so, thank you for the fav on this as well! If you'd be interested please do check out the rest of my vocaloid stuff~
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~BeautifulBlack-Soul Nov 5, 2011  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
i did, and i have to say, you're very poetic. i love your icon. :iconrozenmaidenfan:
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~RozenMaidenFan Nov 6, 2011  Hobbyist Photographer
Thank you very, very much! :]
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~UsoppLover4EVER Sep 30, 2010  Hobbyist General Artist
:w00T!: The 2nd Alice has always been my fave...possibly cuz just like him I'd rather sing than do anything else plus I will sing about some preeety graphic stuff...
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~RozenMaidenFan Oct 24, 2010  Hobbyist Photographer
Mmhmm! True true, thank you ^^
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*AngelOfBeauty88 Nov 9, 2009  Hobbyist Digital Artist
My friend got me hooked on that song. ^_^ I think he's sooo cute.
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~RozenMaidenFan Nov 9, 2009  Hobbyist Photographer
Awww, yesh, yes he is x3
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